Sea of Thieves – Feedback on my first ever musical interpretation of Who Shall Not Be Returning with LMMS

So. I recently started using LMMS. And I started by making my first ever Musical remake of WSNBR.

Plugins I used:
Spitfire labs: Granular Whalesong / Music box / Soft Piano
BBC Symphonic Orchestra

Every form of criticism is appreciated and It would be good to get some advices !!

Have a good day dear Sea Dogs !!

My sound: soundcloud.com/paul-martine-421937153/who-shall-not-be-returning-my-first-arrangment?si=1e6b4f20e3e741f6a24d916cac93d1c7&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing